Possible 5 BR Villa With Pool To rent out ?
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Possible 5 BR Villa With Pool To rent out ?
Lovely renovation House 5bedroom , More photos soon !
Swimming pool
Rental fee $ 4000 / month
Location: Chaktomok area, closed to royal palace
5 Bedrooms and 5 Bathrooms
Nice 2 Livingroom and 1 Kitchen
Another floors plus Balcony
Full Furnished
Privately villa located in Chatomok closed to royal palace , there is 5 Bedrooms and bathrooms , swimming pool , and very nice garden around , a nice place for family , new renovation with living style Western , I would like to invite you to inspection before too late , long term lease suitable .
Walking distance to river, national parks etc ...
Please Contact Us For Viewing
Tel:+855 12 549 249 ( What'sApp)
Email: [email protected]
Thank you!
Swimming pool
Rental fee $ 4000 / month
Location: Chaktomok area, closed to royal palace
5 Bedrooms and 5 Bathrooms
Nice 2 Livingroom and 1 Kitchen
Another floors plus Balcony
Full Furnished
Privately villa located in Chatomok closed to royal palace , there is 5 Bedrooms and bathrooms , swimming pool , and very nice garden around , a nice place for family , new renovation with living style Western , I would like to invite you to inspection before too late , long term lease suitable .
Walking distance to river, national parks etc ...
Please Contact Us For Viewing
Tel:+855 12 549 249 ( What'sApp)
Email: [email protected]
Thank you!
Comments For Improvement Pls !
- John Bingham
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Re: Possible 5 BR Villa With Pool To rent out ?
I wouldn't consider Kirirom or Preah Monivong parks to be walking distance.
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Re: Possible 5 BR Villa With Pool To rent out ?
I'd like to see more photos.
Does it come with a pool boy?
Does it come with a pool boy?
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Re: Possible 5 BR Villa With Pool To rent out ?
Are you asking a question, or advertising a property? I'm confused
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Re: Possible 5 BR Villa With Pool To rent out ?
Hehe... I mean public park next to royal palaceJohn Bingham wrote: ↑Wed Dec 19, 2018 7:22 pmI wouldn't consider Kirirom or Preah Monivong parks to be walking distance.
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Re: Possible 5 BR Villa With Pool To rent out ?
OK Ken, in your signature you ask for comments for improvement. I have some....
If you try to rent out a 4000 USD per month villa, don't try to do so with a free, anonymous gmail address. Register a nice domain name in your own name, and use that one for your business e-mail. Provides both you and your clients with a level of privacy that should come with these kind of rental prices.
Then, if people are paying that kind of money for renting a property, they will expect decent written English in the advertisement. Not the second grade English full of typos and grammar mistakes you provide them with. Have someone with decent command of English go through your adds with you, pay him or her 25 bucks, and publish a decent ad next time.
Here, look and find the errors, there's at least 10 in the text below:
You're welcome,Nice 2 Livingroom and 1 Kitchen
Another floors plus Balcony
Full Furnished
Privately villa located in Chatomok closed to royal palace , there is 5 Bedrooms and bathrooms , swimming pool , and very nice garden around , a nice place for family , new renovation with living style Western , I would like to invite you to inspection before too late , long term lease suitable .
Walking distance to river, national parks etc ...
Spoiler:
and yes, i had to edit for typos myself
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Re: Possible 5 BR Villa With Pool To rent out ?
Look at Mark CEO fb , he don't like something brandy ...Most important the property suit with customers , it's not about email domain name , professional or big or small company .Kammekor wrote: ↑Thu Dec 20, 2018 10:01 amOK Ken, in your signature you ask for comments for improvement. I have some....
If you try to rent out a 4000 USD per month villa, don't try to do so with a free, anonymous gmail address. Register a nice domain name in your own name, and use that one for your business e-mail. Provides both you and your clients with a level of privacy that should come with these kind of rental prices.
Then, if people are paying that kind of money for renting a property, they will expect decent written English in the advertisement. Not the second grade English full of typos and grammar mistakes you provide them with. Have someone with decent command of English go through your adds with you, pay him or her 25 bucks, and publish a decent ad next time.
Here, look and find the errors, there's at least 10 in the text below:
You're welcome,Nice 2 Livingroom and 1 Kitchen
Another floors plus Balcony
Full Furnished
Privately villa located in Chatomok closed to royal palace , there is 5 Bedrooms and bathrooms , swimming pool , and very nice garden around , a nice place for family , new renovation with living style Western , I would like to invite you to inspection before too late , long term lease suitable .
Walking distance to river, national parks etc ...
Spoiler:
and yes, i had to edit for typos myself
I do my way and my English grammar it's not my native language . i will take attention my next post . fork looking to hunt property not to hunted my mistake spelling my writing .
Thank you for always pay high attention to scrolled my ads . Please continue to correct next ....
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Re: Possible 5 BR Villa With Pool To rent out ?
One would assume, ( maybe incorrectly) IF ur able to rent the villa, shop, sell something...
YOU make commissions, so its in ur best interest, if ur perspective clients are english speakers, to do a lot better with your english listings
Also as Kammekor says, get ur own domain and dedicated email, only cost ya a $100 or so a year
"...he don't like something brandy"
not only terrible englsh, but i have no idea what brandy means
YOU make commissions, so its in ur best interest, if ur perspective clients are english speakers, to do a lot better with your english listings
Also as Kammekor says, get ur own domain and dedicated email, only cost ya a $100 or so a year
"...he don't like something brandy"
not only terrible englsh, but i have no idea what brandy means
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Re: Possible 5 BR Villa With Pool To rent out ?
Communicating properly with clients is not what I would call 'brandy', assuming I know what 'brandy' is. It's just a necessity for doing proper business and for making deals. But to each his own.Ken2016 wrote: ↑Thu Dec 20, 2018 11:44 amLook at Mark CEO fb , he don't like something brandy ...Most important the property suit with customers , it's not about email domain name , professional or big or small company .Kammekor wrote: ↑Thu Dec 20, 2018 10:01 amOK Ken, in your signature you ask for comments for improvement. I have some....
If you try to rent out a 4000 USD per month villa, don't try to do so with a free, anonymous gmail address. Register a nice domain name in your own name, and use that one for your business e-mail. Provides both you and your clients with a level of privacy that should come with these kind of rental prices.
Then, if people are paying that kind of money for renting a property, they will expect decent written English in the advertisement. Not the second grade English full of typos and grammar mistakes you provide them with. Have someone with decent command of English go through your adds with you, pay him or her 25 bucks, and publish a decent ad next time.
Here, look and find the errors, there's at least 10 in the text below:
You're welcome,Nice 2 Livingroom and 1 Kitchen
Another floors plus Balcony
Full Furnished
Privately villa located in Chatomok closed to royal palace , there is 5 Bedrooms and bathrooms , swimming pool , and very nice garden around , a nice place for family , new renovation with living style Western , I would like to invite you to inspection before too late , long term lease suitable .
Walking distance to river, national parks etc ...
Spoiler:
and yes, i had to edit for typos myself
I do my way and my English grammar it's not my native language . i will take attention my next post . fork looking to hunt property not to hunted my mistake spelling my writing .
Thank you for always pay high attention to scrolled my ads . Please continue to correct next ....
And personally, if someone approaches me for business using a 'free' gmail or hotmail, or similar address, you know what I do?
Exactly - not waste my time reading it.
The fact English is not your mother-tongue is no excuse, its not mine too. But if you choose to offer high quality services or products to English speaking customers, speaking or writing pidgin English is not supporting your business. It's that simple Ken. And it's easy to avoid. You use the same descriptions all the time (that could be another advice....), so once you've got your basic sentences correct you can build from that.
But hey, you thought it all through, and all's well. Good luck with your business. And maybe change your signature back to 'run for your life'?
Oh yeah, and I edited 'advise' to 'advice'. No native speaker.....
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