Wings
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Re: Wings
Yes officer, this post here.ofparadise wrote: ↑Sun Nov 14, 2021 9:13 pm
Should he just pluck them and fly away one by one?
You can't separate a child from a mother, right?
Would that be best for those who have grown up wingless?
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Re: Wings
lol... some of the replies were funny. Thanks for all the responses. I was hoping someone will continue the verse, like an improv session.
This is not a autobiographical entry. It's an outline of a play that's a part of a longer series, about free will vs determinism vs destiny, and the drama of living based on various characters on both sides of the grey line. It's a very old question, "calling" vs "life"... and it allows a lot of creativity and dramatic devices when exploring both sides.
I'm happy the protagonist in this verse,evoked such strong emotional responses. Might explore his character that for the next chapters... although the sample size for this reader test was small.
New title for the thread perhaps:
Wings... Curse or Blessing?
This is not a autobiographical entry. It's an outline of a play that's a part of a longer series, about free will vs determinism vs destiny, and the drama of living based on various characters on both sides of the grey line. It's a very old question, "calling" vs "life"... and it allows a lot of creativity and dramatic devices when exploring both sides.
I'm happy the protagonist in this verse,evoked such strong emotional responses. Might explore his character that for the next chapters... although the sample size for this reader test was small.
New title for the thread perhaps:
Wings... Curse or Blessing?
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Re: Wings
It sounded more like advice fetching in the gayest way, but now retropedaling.
Whatever.
Whatever.
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Re: Wings
Take some time to read through my other posts on this forum. When looking for advice, I speak clearly and accurately. In case you did not read...Ghostwriter wrote: ↑Mon Nov 15, 2021 7:04 pm It sounded more like advice fetching in the gayest way, but now retropedaling. Whatever.
I'm gonna ignore your gay remark, as I am able to read between the lines. But, don't get your panties up in a bunch.ofparadise wrote: ↑Sun Nov 14, 2021 9:16 pm Do share your personal writings in this thread. The veils of anonymity does offer a safe place to vomit without judgement.
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